Quiz 12/10/11

On this last writing project I had some strengths and weaknesses. Some of the strengths that I had in it were transitions and good vocabulary. I made sure to use transitions because I knew those would be important to include. I also decided to use better vocabulary's, such as words that would attract the reader more. I used lots of examples to back of my topic sentence and every paragraph. With strengths in my writing project, I also had weaknesses. Some of the weaknesses were that I think I might of repeated myself to much. I believe that I should earn a B on my writing project because I believe that I did a good job. I used everything I learned in this class and used it in my writing, or at least tried to.